Typhoon Hagupit- A deadly sight
Ripping through the city
An angry dog
Everyone expects it
No one can stop it
Shelters fill up to capacity
Like a reservoir saving up
Schools are closed
Children rejoice
No one knows whats about to unfold
But then, like lions lying in wait
it strikes.
Everyone in fear
With one hope in mind
It all goes away
Typhoon Hagupit - A deadly sight
By Adam Zoen 7A1
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12 comments:
Very good poem.
Good use of things.(language techniques)
Good design and template...nice poem
nice poem but in my opinion it could be better with rhyming words :)
Great language good rhythm
I like it, good work
you used really powerful words and it was really really good, well done adam
tara
Nice poem and cool downloaded template =D
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good use of language e.g. like lions lying in wait
it strikes.
Nice Poem
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